Tuesday 6 December 2016

The Crystal

                I was walking home, when all of a sudden, a bright object caught my sight.  I walked towards it to see what it was.  It looked like a crystal.  I looked around to see if it belonged to anyone, but I was alone.  I continued walking but I kept remembering about the crystal.  I decided to go back again.  I walked to the place where I first saw it.  It wasn’t there anymore!  That was weird.  I started walking and then I saw the crystal.  It was on the grass.  I looked to see if anyone was there.  As I turned around it changed shape into a dog.  I sprinted as fast as I could!

1 comment:

  1. You don't need the comma between home and when for your first sentence

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