Friday, 2 December 2016



                                                 The Crocodile 





I entered the dark zoo, and all of a sudden a CROCODILE was chasing me! I turned back to see if it was still there but I noticed that the crocodile’s eyes were WIDE and ORANGE.  Right then I bumped into a pole and COLLAPSED.  I was on my knees, moving away from the reptile, when something pulled me back.  It was my friend Joe.
 “ I knew you would be here,” said Joe.


We waited for a minute and then as we were about to leave the crocodile popped out of nowhere.  Within a second we sprinted out of the zoo!

1 comment:

  1. nice story, but I think you should have a comma after right. on the third sentence.

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