I hated New York. Its litter, constant
pollution and the fact that no one else cared. No one else helped the problem.
I had enough, I was going stop it.
About thirty years ago, I built a symbol in Central Park. The
Giving Tree, that is what I called it. It took me roughly 20 years to build
it. The Giving Tree is a big hand with a
tree in the middle. It represents the
Earth, in our hands and how we should take better care of it. I want people to learn about taking care of
our environment because if we do not, Earth will not last long.
ur story is great but u have some punctuations,its u should change it to it's but everything else is good.
ReplyDeleteBut to change it to 'it's' wouldn't make sense because it's is the abbreviation for it is. I hated New York. It is litter, constant pollution and the fact that no one else cared.
DeleteGreat story. Keep up the great work, 123. ._.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great and detailed story. Keep up the good work, 123!
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