Wednesday 18 January 2017

THE SOUND 


                    I was going upstairs to my room, when I suddenly heard sounds coming from the kitchen.  I was frightened.  Why were there sounds?  No one was home other than me.  I quietly crept downstairs to check.  No was there.  I thought I was just hearing things.  But, again I heard sounds.  I quickly went downstairs. I saw two weird creatures eating my leftover pizza.  My hands started to tremble and my whole body was shaking.  I could not speak.  As the weather changed, they disappeared.  What just happened?  Where did they go?  I was so confused.  

1 comment:

  1. Nice story, but I think you do not need a comma after /room/ in your first sentence. overall nice story..

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