THE SOUND
I was going upstairs to my room, when I suddenly heard sounds coming from the kitchen. I was frightened. Why were there sounds? No one was home other than me. I quietly crept downstairs to check. No was there. I thought I was just hearing things. But, again I heard sounds. I quickly went downstairs. I saw two weird creatures eating my leftover pizza. My hands started to tremble and my whole body was shaking. I could not speak. As the weather changed, they disappeared. What just happened? Where did they go? I was so confused.
Nice story, but I think you do not need a comma after /room/ in your first sentence. overall nice story..
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